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So I walked to the store, because I wanted a Apple.
an Orange
and an organ.

I wanted to see what it was like
Looking at the hearts.
So I went.
And I did.
And as I stared at the hearts, some nice and soft and large
Others small and hard
I pulled my own out to look
And was confused

My heart was large
And it was soft, and clean and loving
But it had a part
Darker
and harder
like a stone, shoved into my heart.
It scared me.

An old woman came over and looked at it
and looked at me
"oh no dearie, you don't want that one.
Get one without a bruise
one which hasn't locked itself up.
That one
that ones bad
It's got love.
But no romance."
And I looked at her
And at my heart
and I left.

It's different, having this heart
Having love
love for people, love for those who amaze me
love for my families and friends
yet no romance
and no way to get any
for my heart is scarred.
and therefore
I am alone.
And will stay there.

Stephanie, please don't hate me for writing this. I thought your was so clever and interesting and i just wanted to see if I could play with the concept, and try and put my own spin on it.

I don't know if I did it very well.

For everyone, go here to read the original poem.

It's much better then mine.

~Sorceress

MOOP!

on 2005-01-08 08:26 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] shuttergal.livejournal.com
But they all have stones and bruises and hard spots. They have flaws and rift and some are held together with wire or will. The ones that look perfect are like winter grocery store tomatoes - bland and grey and maybe even rotten inside. Darling, to be a healer, you must first practice true compassion and lvoe for yourself, all of yourself, or else you will always be caught in the judgement game.

on 2005-01-09 08:10 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] saberwing.livejournal.com
All of my friends deserve love, and i hate it when any of them get hurt (especially when i could've done something about it.

that poem also felt true to me.

~The Fish

P.S. if you are looking for a good fantasy book to read: The Magic of Recluce by L.E. Modesitt JR.

on 2005-01-09 11:36 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sheisacarnival.livejournal.com
I don't hate you
I'm very flattered

on 2005-06-24 10:17 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] drama-angel3189.livejournal.com
intersting
Very intresting

~V~

on 2005-07-21 02:29 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kdsorceress.livejournal.com
Thanks!

~Sor

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